I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms. Aireen & Ms. Komor.
Hi Edith,I really like the way you added lots of describing words about the dragon. I think you could improve by re - reading your sentences just to make sure it makes sense. But anyways keep up the good work.
Hi Edith,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added lots of describing words about the dragon. I think you could improve by re - reading your sentences just to make sure it makes sense. But anyways keep up the good work.