I am a Year 6 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Miss Ashley.
Hi Edith,I like the way you put some great words to explain what is happening in the pictures. I also like the way you put the WALT in so you can tell others what you were learning. But next time you should a sentence at the bottom to tell them why you did this. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!