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Monday, 7 November 2016

A bubble adventure with Room 8 and Room 7

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  1. Namaste past Edith,
    I am your future self and I thought I would give myself some tips, I like how you have tried to make the blog post fun by adding really cool photos, Next time you could add more detail and rechecking your sentences to make sure they make sense. you could also check your punctuation.

    -Edith

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