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Tuesday 20 February 2018

Te Tuhi trip 2018


On Friday we went to Te Tuhi so I decided to write a reflection of my experience there.  In Te Tuhi we learnt about 2 artists.  We also got to make our own collage poster.  I enjoy going to Te Tuhi and seeing the beautiful artworks.  I hope we can go again.
This is my reflection for Te Tuhi.


2 comments:

  1. Great choice of images Edith! This made me stop and want to know more about your post!
    I found it helpful that you used words such as 'first', 'next', 'after' because it helped me to see there was a sequence to your day at Te Tuhi.

    The name of your play was titled: The Three Runaway Pigs.
    That's an interesting title. As a reader I'm curious to know how your play was different from the famous The Three Little Pigs fable.
    FEEDFORWARD: Try to anticipate (predict) questions your reader may have and include that information in your writing.
    I look forward to our next Te Tuhi experience.

    Great use of labels Edith!

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    1. Thank you Ms. Komor for the feedforward I will use that information for my blog posts in the future.

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