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Friday 30 March 2018

Blog Commenting - Room 7 2018

Blog Commenting - Room 7
IALT: leave positive comments on my classmates blog!

Talofa Lava and welcome to my blog! Today I will be doing another blog commenting post and tonight's version is... ROOM 7!!! (Blog link)


The blog post I will be commenting on is his 'Bridge Art'. Here is the comment:
The reason why I commented on Room 7's work is because Room 7 was my classroom last year and I thought I would give a few tips for the future. A few tips for Room 7 is to see if there punctuation is correct.
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Blog Commenting - Jose'

Kia ora today I will be commenting on my brother Jose's blog. I will comment on his Brian Mcgarvin race reflection!

Jose's Blog:
http://tpsjoses.blogspot.co.nz/2018/03/brian-mcgoverns-car-race.html#comment-form
Jose's Blog post:
http://tpsjoses.blogspot.co.nz/2018/03/brian-mcgoverns-car-race.html#comment-form






Here is my Comment


Why did I choose to write on Jose's blog?
I decided to write on Jose's blog because as I said Jose' and I are siblings and I just wanted to give him a bit of feedforward and feedback to help him in his future blog posts.

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Blog Commenting - Leilani

IALT: Leave positive feedbacks on other's blogs! 


Malo Lelei and greetings to you all! Welcome back to my blog. Today for this blog post I will be blog commenting again on Leilani's blog! I will be commenting on her Band practise reflection.


This is Leilani!
Why did I commented on Leilani's blog?
The reason I chose to comment on Leilani's blog is because as I was scrolling on the class blog I saw one of her posts I saw that she wrote about band practise and I thought I would give it a read and I noticed so things that she would have improved on!

Here is the comment I wrote to Leilani:

Here is Leilani's response:

Life as STUDENT LEADER!

Bonjour everybody,
I don't know if you guys know but I am a student leader and I thought
I would give a few tips on how life is as a student leader.

As a student council you also have to prepare a speech about yourself in 
assembly to re-introduce yourself and why you think you were chosen!
Here is my speech from this year:

Thursday 29 March 2018

How to Blog Comment!!!



Hello Everyone! Today I have decided to explain to yous why I do blog commenting and why it is important! I hope yous enjoy me doing blog commenting and keep on checking out my blog because your blog might be the one that I comment on! 
Here is my task link:
Task Link

If you cannot reach my task link here is another poster to explain about Blog Commenting:

Blog Commenting - Year 5 Edith :D



Blog Commenting 2016 Edith!
2016 Edith (Year 5 me)

Why did I write on my own blog?
I decided to write a comment on one of my old blogs because I thought it would be so fun to see the progress I have made with my past to present blog post. I hope that some of my classmates and others also do this by commenting on all there old blog posts because it is just really fun to do.
Here is my comment!
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Blog Commenting - Aumau


Blog Commenting - Aumau!!!
Talofa lava EVERYBODY! Today I will be doing a blog commenting post about one of my fellow classmates, Aumau . We are commenting on his Kiwisport/Volleyball reflection.

Why did I comment on Aumau's blog?
I decided to write on Aumau's blog because I feel like I shouldn't give feedback to my friends but to other classmates and I thought I should shake things up with my Blog commenting post.  
Here is my Comment!
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Tuesday 27 March 2018

Kiwisports/Volleyball reflection



Here is my Kiwisport and Volleyball reflection.

Here are some questions I will be answering about the topic:
How do you feel about Kiwisport this week? Why? (Give at least 2 reasons)

I was really excited because we were trying a new sport which is volleyball and volleyball is a sport that I never thought that I could able to play. I was also tired because there was quite a lot of running and I had to wait for my turn which means I was also impatient.
What parts of it did you like? Why? (Give at least 2 reasons)
I liked hitting the ball in Volleyball and Tennis because I like to see where the ball ended up. I also liked learning how to play volleyball and the techniques.
What parts of it do you need to work on?  (Give at least 2 reasons)

I need to work on hitting the volleyball in the proper position and make sure that I am focused.
What did you learn about Volleyball this week?
The different techniques and how to use them
What would you like to learn about Volleyball?
I would like to learn how to win to be ready for the tournament coming up.

Here is my task link:
Task Link

Police Chase - Car Stolen in Glen Innes, 2010



Hola everybody,
WALT: Write an article about our community using different types of NZ articles.
Our task:
1. NZ website to find an article about our community.
2. Write about it.
3. Put the link to your article in your blog.
NZ herald website :D

In this article I have written about an incident that had happened in 2010 at one of our local communities, Glen Innes. I hope you enjoyed reading this article as much as I did writing about it. If you cannot read my article here is my task link:
Task Link :D

Thank you for reading my blog post about a Police Chase that had happened in GI a long time ago. Please comment what you guys think I should improve on for my next blog post!
BYE!!!

Sunday 25 March 2018

My INSPIRING quote bubble 2.0



This is my 2nd quote that I have been using a lot because it builds me up when I am down or when something is to difficult I just think of this quote as well.

Zumba Thursday ADVERTISEMENT!!!!


Here is a poster that Grace, Lydia and I created to advertise our lunchtime sport... Zumba.  Come and join Lydia, Grace and I in the hall during Thursday lunchtime sport Zumba.  It will be at lunchtime after you eat.  Come and have some fun in the hall!!! There will be different dances, different songs and lots of fun!  We just want to encourage children to have some fun throughout there breaks and playing fairly. There will be lots of laughter! 

Remember it's on Thursday! If you have any questions then just comment down below!

Blog Commenting - Hope.L

Hope is the girl in the middle
Talofa and welcome back to my blog. Today I am going to be blogging on a year 6s blog named Hope. Hope and I are quite close as she is Hevani's sister. The blog I will commenting on is 2017 in Room 8 (Hopes blog)
Here is the comment I wrote:)



Why did I choose to write on Hopes blog?
I decided to write on Hope's blog because not only do the older ones need some improving on their work.   









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Friday 23 March 2018

TPS Tour Rm 7 2017





Malo lelei everybody,

as I was scrolling down on some of my old videos I had seen a video

of the school of Grace, Coralee, Hevani, Lydia, Hiria and I created a

Tamaki Primary school tour last year in 2017.

I hope you enjoy this video as much as I did :D.

Kia Manawanui Talent Show advertisement!


Kia ora, This is my advertisement DLO for the Kia Manawanui Talent show!

Here is my task link:
TASK LINK

Thursday 22 March 2018

Technology Reflection

On Thursday on the 15th of march we had our 5 lesson of technology. I was in Ms. Ferguson's class. I was really excited that we got assigned to graphics. We were going to start on creating our phone stand! But instead we decided to learn about how to draw 3d drawings. Here is my reflection about technology. Hope you enjoy.

Here is my 3d picture I drew if you want to see a better view:


















Here is my task link:
Task Link

Wednesday 21 March 2018

Blog Commenting - Leilani

Good Afternoon EVERYBODY
today I am going to be
commenting on another one of my
friends blog; but this time it is
going to be...
LEILANI!!!!!!!!!!!!

The blog that I will be commenting
of Leilani's work is...
Writing Reflection.


WHY DID I CHOOSE TO WRITE ON LEILANI'S BLOG?
I decided to write on Leilani blog because I just wanted to give people in our classroom a bit of feedforward and feedback to help them in there future blog posts.

Writing Reflection

Writing Reflection!
WALA: Figurative Language.

Today after morning tea the Kia Manawanui syndicate had writing. Grace, Lydia and I weren't at the writing lesson because we had to promote our lunchtime sport, Zumba. In writing they learnt about alliteration and hyperbole, but I thought I would also explain about Similes, Metaphors, Onomatopoeia and Personification . 

Even though I had to rush writing down the definition I still had a fun time sticking up posters around the school!

Here is my task link:

Self Defense poster



WALT: Show what we learned during our Self defense lessons.
Since it was our last week doing Self defense, the girls in the Kia manawanui syndicate thought it would be a good idea to promote Self defense to the girls that are doing Self defense next year by doing a poster.

What I enjoyed but found challenging about the Self defense lessons was using my voice because when we were yelling at our friends I couldn't stop laughing and it felt weird yelling at my friends.

Here is my task link:
Task Link

Tuesday 20 March 2018

Maths Reflection

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WALT: Find and apply rules to sequential patterns
On Monday we had maths.  Our topic is to find and apply rules to sequential patterns.  We had to fill these sheets out that relates to the topic.  I have really enjoyed this lesson.  What I found challenging in this lesson was finding a way to solve the problems. I would like to say thank you Ms. Komor for such  a fun but challenging task.

Here is my reflection if you can't read it on the DLO:
On Monday the 19th of March 2018 we had maths with Ms. Komor.

During maths we learnt how to find and apply rules for sequential patterns. We got these worksheets and in them were problems we had to solve the problems on the worksheet and find the pattern and the rule while solving them.

We had been given 3 sheets that we had to solve by ourselves and one more that we had to make problems for a classmate. While I was figuring out what to write I was also wondering who I should give my questions to and then I figured out who to give it too. I decided to give the problems to… GRACE. I gave Grace some challenging questions for her to solve.

After the next day Grace gave me her answers and no surprise but she got all of them right. After that Grace gave me some of her questions and all I can say is… WISH ME GOOD LUCK.

Thank you for reading my blog reflection about Maths yesterday. Please comment what you think I should improve on. BYE!!!!!

Monday 19 March 2018

Kiwisports/Cricket Reflection



What problems did you encounter while you were at Kiwisport? How did you solve them? While I was bowling in cricket my serves were very crooked and they kept going everywhere besides the wicket. I solved this problem by moving my position each time to find the perfect spot to pitch.
How do you feel about Kiwisport this week? Why? (Give at least 2 reasons)
I felt excited because I just like hitting the ball and I versing other people .
I was also a bit tired because I had less
sleep because I stayed up late so I am trying to go to sleep earlier.
What are parts of it did you like? Why? (Give at least 2 reasons)
I liked laughing at when I failed at pitching because I feel when you make a mistake just laugh because people won't laugh at you unless you laugh with them, and mistakes what makes life entertaining. I liked doing the skills because I was able to see their strengths and weaknesses in Tennis and Kiwisport.
What parts of it did you dislike? Why?  (Give at least 2 reasons)
One of the main things that I dislike was waiting in line because everybody would rather just hit the ball and play but you have to wait and make sure everybody had a turn and I got used to waiting. I also didn't like that I had to remember everything for this recount.
What did this weeks lesson tell you about yourself and how you learn?
I have starting to make progress in my tennis because now I know how to serve and and I can  control the speed of my htting.  I also gotten a bit better at hitting softly in Tennis.
What would you like to spend more time on during Kiwisport?
I would like to spend more time on aiming while pitching and hitting the ball. I would also like to spend more time on spending more time on hanging out with my classmates instead of making everything into a competition.
What's the one thing that you have seen in your classmate's during Kiwisport  that you would like to try next time?
I would like to try and go for every hit that the pitchers throw like how Amaua and Teresa did.

Here is my reflection incase you can't read it:
Today we had we had Kiwi Sports and Cricket as it is Monday today.
First was home group 2 had Cricket which was my group. Ms. Komor was watching our group at Cricket while Ms. Jade was watching home group 1 at tennis.

During Cricket I was the bowler so I had the target of the game for myself was to aim the ball at the wicket so I could get the person hitting the ball OUT!  While I was bowling I must say that they weren’t the best throws but hey at least I tried and it was not like we were at a national game. While I was hitting I always try to hit is far and I did but I feel I should improve on hitting it far and running all the time instead of just running and then stopping.

Around about 10:15 it was home groups 2 turn to go to Kiwisport AKA Tennis. During Tennis we were learning about rallies. The warm-up we did was that we had to just hit the  ball across so that we could get used to aiming and hitting the ball softly since we had a small area to practise. My partner was Grace. After the warm up Peter said that we were going to play doubles so two people on one side of the net and 2 other people on the other side of the net. The goal of this exercise  was to hit the ball diagonally because Peter was saying that to play doubles you have to hit the ball diagonally but I am not sure why so I will ask him next week. The people on the net playing with grace and I were Kensington, Arizona, Fe’ao, Taonga, Teresa, Alo, Grace and I. The people on my side of the net was Alo, Fe’ao, Taonga and I we were playing against Grace, Teresa, Kensington and Teresa. How we were playing is that there were 2 pairs in the big group. The score ended up being 17 to 17 so it was a tie.

Kiwisport and Cricket was fun and I can’t wait till next week's lesson. Please comment on what I can improve on. Thank you.


Sunday 18 March 2018

Things that DESCRIBE ME!


This is a google drawing that people most describe about me!

Here is my task link:
Task Link

Blog Commenting - Amon

Talofa Lava everybody today I will be commenting 
on my classmate Amons blog and it will be on his post
about Kiwisport and Cricket.

Amons Blog:
https://tpsamont.blogspot.co.nz/
Amons blog post:
https://tpsamont.blogspot.co.nz/2018/03/kiwisportcricket-reflction.html?showComment=1521355626719#c6561775872495646131


Here is my Comment



Why did I choose to write on Amons blog?
I decided to write on Amons blog because I just wanted to give people in our classroom a bit of feedforward and feedback to help them in there future blog posts.


Blog Commenting - Lydia - pt.2

Malo lelei everybody today I will be commenting on Lydia's blog again and it will be on her post about Timelines.

Lydia's Blog:
http://tpslydiabl.blogspot.co.nz/
Lydia's Blog post:
http://tpslydiabl.blogspot.co.nz/2018/03/timelines.html#comment-form

Here is my Comment


Why did I choose to write on Lydia's blog?
I decided to write on Lydia's blog because as I said Lydia and I are best friends and she really helps myself with my work and I just wanted to give her a bit of feedforward and feedback to help her in her future blog posts.
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A Friday to remember!

Today is Sunday and so I thought why not reflect about the fun day I had on Friday after school. I will call this story "A Friday to remember!".
So, yesterday after school my mum picked Jose’ and I from the school office. We had a little rest because we were going to the park in a few hours. Around about 6:00 pm my dad drove me to hobson park. We pulled over and went to the dairy and as I turned my head around the corner I saw Lydia, Lydia’s brother, Grace, Grace’s brother, Grace's sister, Lily, Paula, Paula's brother, Demetrius, Tevita, Mani, Fine and the parents all at the park so I decided I would buy me passion fruit fizzy and then walked over, as I was walking I just saw Grace and Lydia dashing through the grass to come see me I was so afraid but excited to see them.


When I finally arrived at hobsons we just made musicallys on my phone. Then we grabbed Lydia's phone and made a lot of musicallys and took a lot of photos. What was really funny was when Lydia made this musically on my phone and then Tevita threw his shirt at her, she got really angry and grabbed his shirt that he threw and then ran away, he picked up her slippers and so she made a deal with Tevita to give her slippers and she would give his shirt but what made it even more funny is that Lydia didn't even give his shirt. so he gave her slippers and he really thought she was gonna give his shirt back but she didn't and then she ran at her utmost ability but the Paula, and all the little boys chased me until she couldn't run away anymore so she gave the tee-shirt back. It was so FUNNY!
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It was then about 6:47 pm and Tevita and Demetrius decided to go home and play Fortnite, so Grace, Lily, Lydia and I decided to play rugby and touch with the boys that were there so Paula, Mani, Paula's little brother, and Grace and Lydia's little brothers. After we were all quite breathless I decided to call my dad around about 7:15 pm to bring my Segway and then about 2 minutes later my dad approaches with the Segway and If course Grace, Lydia and I were going to make a musically because it was Graces and Lydia's first time of going on a Segway. We also took a lot of photos in snapchat but I will show you my favourite one.
Here is the Photo and Video:



Here are some more Musicallys we made:





I hope you enjoyed this refection as I will hopefully be writing another reflection about NEXT FRIDAY!



Blog Commenting - Kensington

Kia ora everybody today I am going to be doing a blog commenting post. My victim is... Kensington! 
This is Kensington
The blog post that I will be commenting on is Blog Commenting - Alo.










Here is my comment:





Why did I choose Kensington?
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I choose Kensington because as I was reading his work I found it wasn't really fascinating so I thought I could give heim a few tips.

Saturday 17 March 2018

Te Tuhi reflection 2

 1-Paint over a cleared paper.
2-Paint over it in Black until you can see any spots.
3-Dab on the artwork
4-Leave the artwork to dry
5-Draw softly with a pencil.

6-Use a nail to press on the drawing and then make it clear to see your drawing.
7-get a coloured paper and put it at the back of your drawing.

Was this a new artwork skill for you?
Yes this had been new to me and I really enjoyed it because how I got to learn how to do these types of things.
I did find it challenging with etching it because how my nail kept on going to the side
My Letter :D
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Marias Work

Here is my Reflection if you can't see it on the DLO.

Today we went to Te Tuhi to learn about the history of Aotearoa New Zealand.

We first started off by doing these artworks that we created. The Artwork we did was etching how we did it, it was that we got a letter from a sentence that had 46 characters. For the artwork we did a block letter and then we designed the background with things that we enjoy the most about New Zealand.

After the artworks we went and learnt about these two artist, the first artist we learnt about was John Veau, while we were learning about the arts of John Veau, Salome (Our guidance) Told us about his artwork. John Veau’s artwork is about how people have to work and they just stand and looking around, the name of his artwork from his friend and it is called “Enjoy this moment, don’t be like me and be here for life”. After learning  about John we moved onto this Mexican artist and her name is Maria, Maria made a sculpture out of pantie hoes because she said that clothes to cover the body or to show less apparently shows who you are on the inside so she used the material of pantie hoes material because the material is really see through. This is why Marias sculpture was called “Invisible”.

I would like to say thank you to Salome for giving us the opportunity to do some Fun artwork and learning about these other famous artists in New Zealand Aotearoa. Thank you to the teachers as well for planning for the trip and our parents letting us go.

In conclusion this was a really fun day and I hope we can come back. Please comment what you enjoyed about this reflection, Thanks.