Blog Commenting - Lily

This is Lily

Greetings to all and welcome back to my blog. Today I am going to be blogging on a year 5s blog named Lily. Lily and I are quite close as she is Grace's sister. The blog I will commenting on is Writing story about life in the 1850's. (Lily's blog)

Here is the comment I wrote:)

Why did I choose to write on Lily's blog?

I decided to write on Lily's blog because not only do the older ones need some improving on their work but the younger kids also need some feedforward and feedback even more so that there mind can develop stronger skills that they need in the future when the blog.