Hey Edith, I really LOVE this DLO! It is very eye catching, it is colourful, and it has a lot of information in it. I really love the way you were creative with your piece of work and that you were able to describe yourself in a positive way! Next time could you please change the colours of some writing so it is more clear to see. Ka Pai! - Lydia
Hi edith I really love this DLO! This is very colourful and very eye catching( like what lydia said). I like how you described about yourself this just tells me that you know yourself really well and all these things are very ture! Maybe next time you could change the font because I can't quite see the words. Besides that you have done a really great job finishing this piece of work, Amazing Ako!
Hey Edith,
ReplyDeleteI really LOVE this DLO! It is very eye catching, it is colourful, and it has a lot of information in it. I really love the way you were creative with your piece of work and that you were able to describe yourself in a positive way! Next time could you please change the colours of some writing so it is more clear to see. Ka Pai!
- Lydia
Hi edith I really love this DLO! This is very colourful and very eye catching( like what lydia said). I like how you described about yourself this just tells me that you know yourself really well and all these things are very ture! Maybe next time you could change the font because I can't quite see the words. Besides that you have done a really great job finishing this piece of work,
ReplyDeleteAmazing Ako!
Hola Lydia and Grace,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the advice and now I will fix it now.
-Edith