Malo lelei!
Recently I have felt like I haven't blogged in a real long time so today I will be blogging on my classmates blog! The victim of this blog commenting post is... Tevita! I chose to do Tevita because why not? He is just one of my classmates and I thought I would give him a bit of feedback of what I think he should work on!
The blog that I will be commenting on is...
Here is my comment that I gave him:
Some tips for Tevita is that he could re-read his sentences to make sure the are understandable to the audience, add a bit more detail to his work and also making sure punctuation is in the correct place!
I hope you enjoy and I dare you to comment what you think I can improve on!
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