I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms. Aireen & Ms. Komor.
Wednesday 29 June 2016
Tuesday 28 June 2016
Predict with images
Predict what you think would happen after these pictures were taken.. Then explain what clues in the image made you predict that
What do you predict will happen next?
He will trip and the wires will break because of the water in his hand and a water cooler is right next to him.
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What clues in the image made you predict that? There is a bunch of wires so he can trip and he just filled his cup of water up.
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What do you predict will happen next?He will throw the water balloons and it might collapse on someone because he must be in a water fight with his friends.
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What clues in the image made you predict that?That he has water under his bucket so someone must be throwing them at him and because he is pointing the same was as the balloon.
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What do you predict will happen next?He will be chased by a car and will turn into an alley because he might be running from someone who doesn't like him.
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What clues in the image made you predict that?
From the fact that he is looking back at the car and turning the opposite of a car so he might be running into an alleyway.
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What do you predict will happen next?
I think that he is going to get full and the sandwich will rot and will probably want something more small.
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What clues in the image made you predict that?His sandwich is as big as his head and it has a lot of meat in it.
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Friday 24 June 2016
Acrostic poems for friends
Acrostic poems for friends
S - Smart T - Tough E - Energetic P - Pretty H - Hillarious N - Nice E - Enthusiastic Y - Young
C - Courageous A - Awesome R - Responsible R - Respectful A - Amazing
L - Likeable Y - Youtube addiction D - Delightful I - Incredible A - Awesome
G - Great R - Reliable A - Artist C - Confident E - Excellent
H - Helpful E - Elegant V - Viciouse A - Adventurous N - Natural I - Intelligent
S - Smart T - Tough E - Energetic P - Pretty H - Hillarious N - Nice E - Enthusiastic Y - Young
C - Courageous A - Awesome R - Responsible R - Respectful A - Amazing
L - Likeable Y - Youtube addiction D - Delightful I - Incredible A - Awesome
G - Great R - Reliable A - Artist C - Confident E - Excellent
H - Helpful E - Elegant V - Viciouse A - Adventurous N - Natural I - Intelligent
Thursday 23 June 2016
Wednesday 22 June 2016
Tuesday 21 June 2016
Free Writing
WALT:Write for leisure and I chose Poetry
LIMERICK
I really love to ball
Best thing out of all
It is a great thing
More than a diamond ring
But I don't like it when I fall.
Acrostic
Writing and
Reading Is one of
The top and
Incredible things
Nothing can beat it not even a
Golden diamond ring.
Ally alligator always adored ants such as Aurora.
Aurora actually thought Ally alligator was always annoying as a alliteration all ants time.
LIMERICK
I really love to ball
Best thing out of all
It is a great thing
More than a diamond ring
But I don't like it when I fall.
Acrostic
Writing and
Reading Is one of
The top and
Incredible things
Nothing can beat it not even a
Golden diamond ring.
Haiku
I like playing sport
So fun will make a report
Will play it on courts
AlliterationAlly alligator always adored ants such as Aurora.
Aurora actually thought Ally alligator was always annoying as a alliteration all ants time.
WALT: to find information using visual clues
I am learning how to think what the story is of just looking at the Pictures
Friday 17 June 2016
Brian Falkner post
On wednesday a special guest came to our school and it was a famous author named Brian falkner he is funny and can say hello in every language it was fun and my class even won the
BRIAN FALKNER CHALLENGE!!! it was awesome and he has sold 13 books and 1 will come in August and his other book will come in November.He is a really cool person.
Thursday 16 June 2016
Book review on "Crinkum Crankum"
BOOK REVIEW
Title:Crinkum Crankum
Author:Margaret Mahy
What would you rate this book out of 10?
I would rate about a 3 Who are you recommending this book to? (Other year 5 and 6 students? Tamaki Students? Adults? People who like scary/funny stories?)
I would give this book to year 1s , 2s , 3s , and 4s. Who were the main characters in this book?The witch , The Fairy godmother , and the crinkum crankum tree.
What was the theme of the book? (Was it funny? Was it scary? Did it contain lots of action?)A fantasy and a strange book.
What was your favourite part of the book?
When the kids started to play on it.
If you had to use 6 words to describe the book what words would they be?
What would you rate this book out of 10?
I would rate about a 3 Who are you recommending this book to? (Other year 5 and 6 students? Tamaki Students? Adults? People who like scary/funny stories?)
I would give this book to year 1s , 2s , 3s , and 4s. Who were the main characters in this book?The witch , The Fairy godmother , and the crinkum crankum tree.
What was the theme of the book? (Was it funny? Was it scary? Did it contain lots of action?)A fantasy and a strange book.
What was your favourite part of the book?
When the kids started to play on it.
If you had to use 6 words to describe the book what words would they be?
1.Strange
2.Unique
3.Abused
4.Sinister
5.Crazy
6.Magical
Review written by: Edith
Thursday 9 June 2016
Ediths playground story
There once was a girl her name was lilly she was only ten years old she had a mother but not a father and one day they both went to the park as they were going to the park lilly had heard someone say “save your selves it is not safe” but lily just shrugged and went to the park she was playing and laughing and her mum was laughing too and then….
Lily looked to the right and then looked at her mum but her mum was not there and then she felt terrified and scared she did not know what to do and then the voice came back and said “I told you” she was scared then she went out into the streets and was asking for help and then she went back to the park and saw a door she went into it and saw her mum and untied her and got out but then when she got out a man came and killed the mother she started crying and the had her funeral it was a really sad moment for her. Then a few years later they had a child and it was a girl and named it after lily’s mum and they went to the park but lily always brings her knife in case a man came up and tried to kidnap her of her baby.
Lily looked to the right and then looked at her mum but her mum was not there and then she felt terrified and scared she did not know what to do and then the voice came back and said “I told you” she was scared then she went out into the streets and was asking for help and then she went back to the park and saw a door she went into it and saw her mum and untied her and got out but then when she got out a man came and killed the mother she started crying and the had her funeral it was a really sad moment for her. Then a few years later they had a child and it was a girl and named it after lily’s mum and they went to the park but lily always brings her knife in case a man came up and tried to kidnap her of her baby.
Wednesday 8 June 2016
Friday 3 June 2016
Thursday 2 June 2016
Wednesday 1 June 2016
Book report
This is a book presentation about one of my favorite authors Elisabetta dami (Thea stilton)
My profile rap
My rap about myself.
Edith is my name
I am the fame
No one else is me
Because I am unique
I really like to play with anyone
All day
At Tamaki primary school
I think that I am cool no one
Is a fool only if they break the rules
Not from east or west I think I am from the middle and I am awesome
And in family I am little.
I am sorry but the poem has to end
Comment if you want another rap again
See you later from Edith your friend.
Button art in R7
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