Blog Commenting - Tevita

Blog Commenting - Tevita!

Talofa lava viewers, unicorns, aliens or what or whoever you are and welcome back to my blog! Back at it again with a blog commenting post and the person I will be commenting on is my classmate Tevita!

The blog of his that I will be commenting on is his Camp Raglan reflection!

Here are also 2 comments from my peers Lydia and Grace so here are there comments!

Somethings that Tevita can improve on is making sure that his sentences make sense, adding more detail to his work, making his work more eye-catching. Other than that he is an excellent blogger!

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IALT: Leave positive comments on my classmates blog!